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one of the better Master/girl poems I have read. YOu got your poeit across without being all squishy. One thing I dont care for is the caps to designate Y/y. I have never known a real Dom who insisted on those, maybe its just your deferrence to him. still, good work, could use some punctuation in spots, but I see why you didnt, it might have cost you with some other readers though. keep writing,

maria

I find that we are similar you and I I'm here to teach you more so come and let me.<grin>

in chains or bondage fits better. TK U MLJ LV NV