All Comments on 'Befriending the Wolf'

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE CRYING OF EVITA

with words of the Kampf. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww

Talented! A captivating write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

I want you wolfman. After reading this I need to find my buzz tool and dream about you in ecstacy. (((kisses))

Jen

sweetjainsweetjainover 17 years ago
sexy and beautiful

That was an intimate and refreshing read. Thank you.

LiarLiarover 17 years ago
yay!

I've got the attention spam of a goldfish usually, but you kept me alert and sucking up every word thru this lengthy piece. Tempo, attitude and dry wit in a well balanced mix.

champagne1982champagne1982over 17 years ago
Really good

Very enjoyable poetry. I hope the creative writing classes help with getting stuff published. Does the diploma come with a literary agent attached?

Welcome, Carrie.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 17 years ago
Wow!

What a debut! Welcome to Lit (if you're not an alt) I join Eve with a formal invitation to The Cunt Club - AKA The Poetry Discussion Forum.

Tess

WickedEveWickedEveover 17 years ago
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I scrolled down the page and thought, "too damn long." Then I read the first two lines: "I wouldn't call you selfish/you don't sell fish" and I thought, "too damn corny." I don't know why I started reading the rest of the poem. At first, I wanted to dislike it. I didn't want to sit there, reading, and thinking, "too damn good." But I did.

By the way, literotica's poetry forum--be there or be square.

Anonymous
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