by dreamsweet
Lots of good, vivid imagery here, and a great statement about the need to press ever closer. :)
the evocative images compel the reader to savor this one - very well done
Rough sex or bloody ritual?
At least I learned a new word
among the cutting climaxes
Enough similar sounds to keep
the blood and words flowing.
Athame baffles me too, I have to admit, but this is a vivid piece of writing and has made me want more from a writer new to me.
the back of our heads....
Would it be worth it??
I think so
; )
Powerful words and images
you keep getting better and better
thank you