by fawnie
no matter where or when.....the why is always important. TK U MLJ LV NV
The force of this realistic poem makes you want to wade out until it sweeps you out into the current of understanding.
More to life
Than playing on the beach;
It gets too humdrum
When there are still the depths to explore.
Very romantic. It made me smile and want to dip my toes in the water. Thanks.
an invitation like that. I'll bring my flippers and snorkel. :)
it's hopeless.
you are learning and will learn the longer you stay here.
There's no pressure.
Write and learn and save some of your early work and compare it a month or a year from now
Keep writing you'll get better every day
: )
But after correcting a couple of typos in the first stanza, it may sound even more like "Literotica poetry":
Just inside horny bitches
there's a depth that's still waiting
where lovers long
to find themselves swimming.
The last strophe (i think it's called strophe) in the poem really seems to stick out in my mind. This poem possessess excellent and soothing imagery. Hopefully all of us will one day be truly swept away "Beyond Oceans." Well Done!