All Comments on 'Bikini Season II'

and what is shown is not seen. TK U MLJ LV NV

Just 'graduated' (and commented on) your “How to write above the fray”. For me that submission is still fresh, and I have to say, after reviewing the poem I am still looking for the implementation of the principles from there. What I saw here was a straight forward narrative (broken down into lines of a poem - to create a poem? but that is another subject). The materials: summer; women; bikinis; sunglasses providing some freedom to view the view. Ok, but I want to ask: what is YOUR angle here?

Why won’t you try to write your PERSONAL “Bikini season” poem now (should it be number I or number III)?

Bikini season II? Was there a bikini season I that I missed?

I love bikinis, that is, only when they are worn appropriately on a body that looks like the bikini was made for it.