All Comments on 'Bitch or Whore?'

by MickNasty

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TzaraTzaraalmost 15 years ago
Pretty good triolet, Mick,

at least in my opinion. The sense of the poem wanders a bit, but you've executed the form pretty darn well, I think. There's some variation in the form of the repeated lines (which is good), and your meter is, 'far as I can tell, dead on. Well done.

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