All Comments on 'Bite Me'

Kinda stuff.

Great work

great emotion and words

Love the garden of eden line too

Nice work

Thank you

FINE!...Syrupy...scorching....makes me want to be a piece of chocolate.

I liked this when I first saw it posted in the threads, still holds a certain fascination...don't think I need therapy, just someone with an appetite lol Thanks for the interesting nibble.

~Merry

Nicely done in that

beyond all the

words the

visual

length

of

the

lines

looks like

someone took

a bite from the poem.

wallow swim swallow

morsels, bitten

and chewed

eschewed, invigorated

with words,

with you

good poem Liar, careful what ya wish for <weg>

<tongue in cheek> This is the essence of you, Liar. Bravo!

I've already said it once, but it bears repeating. I don't care how insane it makes me to admit it: this poem is truly erotic. ;)

- Mindy

read! And your title is my motto. Thanks.

great fetish... the biting. Nice work ;)

great work...effective use of the apple metaphor. :)

i truly enjoyed this.

whether for lust, love or sustenance. TK U MLJ LV NV