- Erotic Poetry
- Bite Me
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Click hereyeah
you heard me
open wide
accept
take a chunk
of bittersweet
go on
sink your teeth in
work those jaws
for real
this time
bite yes bite
until all held
heaven or hell
bursts free
to coat your lips
with all that is me
water nectar syrup
spirit spit semen
bourbon blood bile
acid lava love
I'm your apple
in the garden of eden
so bite baby bite
become
a part of me
tonight
- COMMENTS
tazz317over 11 years agowhether for lust, love or sustenance. TK U MLJ LV NV
iamslainfwompalmost 20 years agogreat work...effective use of the apple metaphor. :)
i truly enjoyed this.
minsuealmost 20 years agoI've already said it once, but it bears repeating. I don't care how insane it makes me to admit it: this poem is truly erotic. ;)
- Mindy
Maria2394almost 20 years agowallow swim swallow
morsels, bitten
and chewed
eschewed, invigorated
with words,
with you
good poem Liar, careful what ya wish for <weg>
YDDalmost 20 years agoNicely done in that
beyond all the
words the
visual
length
of
the
lines
looks like
someone took
a bite from the poem.
Merrymakeralmost 20 years agoI liked this when I first saw it posted in the threads, still holds a certain fascination...don't think I need therapy, just someone with an appetite lol Thanks for the interesting nibble.
~Merry
tarablackwood22almost 20 years agoFINE!...Syrupy...scorching....makes me want to be a piece of chocolate.
