All Comments on 'Bittersweet Love'

That was so beautiful that it hurt me to read it. Too close to my own situation.

I have just read your story. That, too, was very moving. You have real talent here, and I feel emotionally sad on reading your poem. How expressive!

You have talent with words and can write some powerful emotions into the fabric of your words, but, this piece needs trimming. Reading it at times felt like being in a race. It was like a continuous run-on sentence. Punctuation, pauses, strophes, all help the reader with the flow of words in your mind. That's what you need to convey.

Awaiting the good things that are possible ~ even though the path at the moment is rocky.