by watupdoe
Tone alone is worth 50% on this short piece
----- It has subtle-variational-meanings: to whit: this wit:
1 "if – u leave- my balls blue u"
SHOWING BALLY BLOW BACK
----- 2 "u don’t wanna know what ill do ill smoke a girl"
THE MISSED-SPELLING WORKS AS BOTH "I'LL" AND "ILL"
----- However, though the tone does develop itself into something conclusive, it's not an interesting piece -
----- SO 50% FOR TONE - 25% FOR EFFORT - YIELDS 75%
complete the whole task. TK U MLJ LV NV