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notnamernotnamerabout 16 years ago
ANALYSIS

Tone alone is worth 50% on this short piece

----- It has subtle-variational-meanings: to whit: this wit:

1 "if – u leave- my balls blue u"

SHOWING BALLY BLOW BACK

----- 2 "u don’t wanna know what ill do ill smoke a girl"

THE MISSED-SPELLING WORKS AS BOTH "I'LL" AND "ILL"

----- However, though the tone does develop itself into something conclusive, it's not an interesting piece -

----- SO 50% FOR TONE - 25% FOR EFFORT - YIELDS 75%

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
TO ELIMINATE ALL SPILLAGE AND LEAKAGE

complete the whole task. TK U MLJ LV NV

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