All Comments on 'Blood Lust Part 3'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Yuck!

Why the end-rhymes, but no regard for rhythym or meter whatsoever? Read this aloud to see how awkwardly it is constructed.

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE TRIALS OF AN OGRE

lacks friends and long time relations. TK U MLJ LV NV

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