All Comments on 'Blossom of Spring'

A mother's heartfelt note to her daughter.

It makes me wonder why it would be posted on an adult content site.

It seems out of place here in its innocence.

Constructurally this poem might benefit by some fresher phrases.

The emotional theme is common.

The words don't have to be trite.

Keep writing

Admirable expressions

Of a mother's love for her daughter;

Seems a bit bogged down when

These feelings want to soar.

and the seasons change. TK U MLJ LV NV