All Comments on 'Blue'

by cutvain

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellalmost 13 years ago
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You really don't need to mention blue so many times, you've made your point already with the title. Needs tightening up as at the moment it reads very much like prose

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
JUST BEFORE THE END

there will be a mryiad of color. TK U MLJ LV NV

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