All Comments on 'Body of Work'

Welcome to Lit

With all these submissions.

A couple suggestions here:

First, try submitting one a day,

This will give your verse a fair hearing;

So many at once will likely get passed over.

Second, on this piece, could be tightened up

Perhaps by dropping a couple strophes;

The 4th & 5th, perhaps.

Now I'll read the rest of your submissions.

allows a wake-up call for more enticement, TK U MLJ LV NV