All Comments on 'Breaking the Chain~~ ~~'

but lacks focus, and a unity of theme and image. nice try.

Damn, this doesn't sound like the ravings of a man who never has to release the safety catch on his pistol.

from the mind of make-shift order....your eyes be open...great lines ...sounds like du had a hand in this though or could have..winks/blue

Enjoyed the read.

Just goes to show

Even an alleged East Texas redneck

Can have words so deep

That demand the reader be thinking.

wow...

thought provoking and story telling all in one!

**HUGS**

~LB~