All Comments on 'Breathe'

by pmbluemoon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Push out, pull in

The disconnect between body, soul, and mind is stated here strikingly. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
excellent!

This poem is mentioned in today's New Poem Review in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

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