All Comments on 'Brilliant Blue Lust'

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elizalooelizaloo3 months ago

Your words made me cold, but the ferocious joining of two warmed me right back up....lovely winter beach images. 5*s

BlissMaraBlissMara3 months ago

Your poem offers such a beautiful sense of place, with its natural colors and sounds. You have a keen command of character description, placing each with ease and authenticity into the poem's scene, even hinting at potential development into a story. Really well done!

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I joined lit to read; then decided to write. It turns out I like it more than reading. My newest story is a venture into NonConsensual/reluctance, a new category for me. My Here & Now story series will be exclusively written in 2nd person female perspective, which I love c...