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by LadyAmethyst

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Paul4playPaul4playover 3 years ago
A Broken Survivor

Thank you for sharing this with us.

The raw intimacy of your frustration and your desire is palpable.

The cadence of the early lines is sharp and jagged, like the broken glass.

And then they smooth out as your desire unfolds.

I hope you find a way to consummate your need....

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

So raw and honest!

Thank you for sharing this. Heartbreaking. Hugs

LadyAmethystLadyAmethystover 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you both. Sharing this piece left me feeling more vulnerable than I do when naked and bound, waiting for the flogger to fall.

MorpheusLunarMorpheusLunarabout 3 years ago

Your words translated the pain of your soul and body to other souls and bodies. Well done. I hurt.

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotabout 3 years ago

Your pure words

Tears now

Sliding down my face

LadyAmethystLadyAmethystover 2 years agoAuthor

Being alerted to a new comment brought me back to this piece. And the other comments I missed. Thank you all for reading and sharing your kind words. You all help soothe my brokenness 💜

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userLadyAmethyst@LadyAmethyst
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Long time lover of erotic fiction and poetry. Very drawn to dom/sub dynamics. A true switch, enjoy top or bottom equally and very able to change roles within a scene. Also enjoy vanilla moments within a kink experience or relationship. Everything always with consent. No honor...