All Comments on 'burning the nails'

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echoes_sechoes_sabout 20 years ago
very passionate, feral

beautifully written and expressed. thank you

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
B league poetry?

Where did you find "beleagued "

Google doesn't seem to know it.

Did you pull the "r"s out of your word,

or vice versa?

I like your closing phrase:

"breathing across the glacier

lakes

of fire and treasons."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Like your

style of writing. Very moody, great choice of words and imagery

"beleaguer, beleagued : to besiege by encircling, as with an army or surround on all sides."

I had no probs with my Webster ;)

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