by irishcatsmeow
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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and I understood when the "I" appeared in the end.
but i did go back and read it again with that knowledge
And good for you for seeking love
: )
There is more than one 'I' in the poem. I didn't want to clutter the poem with quotation marks. Also, didn't want to do the he said/she said thing. I didn't think it was too confusing and i did run it by a few others who seemed to get the message. Any suggestions for making it clearer to the reader? Thanks for commenting...feedback is always appreciated.
I hate that i have to now rate my own poem in order to reply...what's up with that?
but was unsure at the end if there is more than one "I" in the poem, or if the "I" had a change of heart?