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by azraeyl

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 13 years ago
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Anyone that can take the word naiad and make it work, should not be writing in ryhmey couplets. some of this is good, shooting for cheap rhymes brings it down

azraeylazraeylover 13 years agoAuthor
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I think I wrote this when I was about 16 or 17, so it'd make sense that my writing style was less developed at the time, but thanks for the honesty.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
ME THINKS THE PURPLE HAZER DROP

addles your olfactory responses. TK U MLJ LV NV

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