All Comments on 'cape fear, a.m., weaving'

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Oldbear63Oldbear63about 10 years ago
Yep

I can hear it, see it, smell it. Been away from the ocean too long. Well done.

TsothaTsothaabout 10 years ago

The first stanza has a clear image for me, a small round stone being carried by wind. I'm having trouble seeing the second, though. How can a single stone possibly create the pattern you're describing?

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