- Erotic Poetry
- Carnal
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Click hereAll I ever wanted to know
rapt in sinuous fibers
of
Fetish
Underscored by
Carnal
Knowledge
The same yen gave rise to
conversation
between serpent and ingénue
and the first taste
of forbidden fruit
- COMMENTS
unpredictablebijouover 15 years agolovely, and I loved the phrase "serpent and ingenue". most excellent, ms. thang.
lorencinoover 15 years agoThis is a perfect example of my struggle with poems I don't understand. <br><br>
I know it's good. <br>
I don't know why it's good; I just know.<br>
I struggle;<br>
feel familiar;<br>
know every word, intimately;<br>
feel every image familiarly,<br>
without traction in my mind.<br>
Helplessness of being tickled<br>
in a dream, vivid, immobilized.<br><br>
I smile and swell with feelings agitated<br>
unsettled in understanding.<br><br>
The last five lines a sentence.<br>
What goes before a fragment<br>
that others understand, while I<br>
languish in synaptic seizure.<br>
champagne1982over 15 years agoI really liked this when I read it on the forums and now I think it makes a fine addition to your index page here. I loved the opener, "rapt in sinuous fibres" indeed. Oooo la la.
Anonymousover 15 years agoGreat word choices even the ones that have nothing to do with the forbidden, but still have that erotic snaky feel.
The_Frank_Blackover 15 years agoTease me, taunt me, you have such a way with words! And the prize in the middle, for those who take the time to look, I thought was well worked in, subtle enough yet strong enough to grab and score.
I love reading you...in every way I can think of ;)
