All Comments on 'Carnival'

I’d go to the carnival with you any day!

A fun and playful poem!

Perfect

Delightful! Your metaphorical play with carnival treats is saucy. Perfect rhythmic cadence too. Thank you.

Delightful

Yummy

Sweet. In so many ways. You are a wordsmith/

Roll up! Roll up! We hear the cry

The fair has come to town

I don't give a fig for any fairground ride

I just want my panties taken down.

Last year behind the waltzer

I sucked a carney's cock

It was long and thick, and very pink

And reminded me of a stick of rock.

Mystic Meg she told my fortune

Which she read in her crystal ball

"You're gonna get fucked," she told me,

"Tonight, in the bumper car hall."

And do you know, her words came true

I was fucked, not once, but thrice.

Once in my cunt, once up my arse,

And in my mouth too. It was very nice.