All Comments on 'Celestial Breeze'

you scare me

I scare myself for liking this

"Star dust breasts,

Giant Reds,

Nipples rising out of the nebula,"

it is a good thing it will be cloudy tonight, I would be tempted to look

are you sure you weren't writing about me?

"Settling in the home of his mind,"

'cept my mind is homeless now, can I live in yours?

Seriously, this does strange things to your mind.

This is a great sounding line: "Visions of breathe tossed willow curls" Is is suppose to be breathe or breath? I guess it could work either way. Though, breath sounds nicer in that line.

After a lovely start I ran into a heated middle and finished

with panting breath. I like this picture. Never made this

connection before.

Yes, you've got it all here. VERY sensual and warming. Liked much. :)

Tongue, fingers, mouth, heart, soul,

Suckling lost secrets,

Quasar between her legs.

There is no better place to search for lost secrets.

ty,bd