All Comments on 'Cherokee'

Hot poem too.

it is good to see poetguy does have some sense of ambiguity, two way, now try 5 or 6. Rofl. I am the master of the two way street.(here) Comes from Empson. And close reading instead of generic.

well 100, worth it.

I am the better creative writer having written Enron's financial reporting. (Readers and PG, that last line was a joke, that can be taken two ways also.)

....she sang "until". Nice, concise and sure of itself. My kind of poem - I notice and approve of the inclusion of "was" in the first line, one little word sets the tone for the rest of the poem.

Tess

am i reading sorrow when others are reading 'hot'?

*reads again*

hmmm - ambiguity doubles a poem, at least :) and much depends upon what the reader brings to the tryst. *brings more next time*