All Comments on 'Cherokee'

am i reading sorrow when others are reading 'hot'?

*reads again*

hmmm - ambiguity doubles a poem, at least :) and much depends upon what the reader brings to the tryst. *brings more next time*

....she sang "until". Nice, concise and sure of itself. My kind of poem - I notice and approve of the inclusion of "was" in the first line, one little word sets the tone for the rest of the poem.

Tess

it is good to see poetguy does have some sense of ambiguity, two way, now try 5 or 6. Rofl. I am the master of the two way street.(here) Comes from Empson. And close reading instead of generic.

well 100, worth it.

I am the better creative writer having written Enron's financial reporting. (Readers and PG, that last line was a joke, that can be taken two ways also.)

Hot poem too.