All Comments on 'Chinese New Year Haiku'

Opinions differ wether haiku is a meter form or a content restriction. Just to warn you before someone comes in and says "it's not actually haiku".

Whether it is or not, is irrelevant imo. It's pretty good. I actually like the second one best. :)

Serious error, haiku on the Chinese New Year? Yin?

Don't

100 reluctantly

You comment in this which is not permitted really. Chinese New Year is perfectly permissable. Modern haiku is not generally written in the 5-7-5 pattern and is it actually hard to get published in this format now (its not taken seriously generally; haiku can be an uppity field).

ed and es endings are only counted if they pronounced. Naked its counted, stopped it isn't.

Sorry I am the resident pain in the arse on this topic.