All Comments on 'Chinese Water Torture'

Nice to see you still about. I think of you every so often. Hope you are happy, healthy and well.

~ brightie

is it not? missed you babe. good to see your work again. as another has said, your readers have indeed missed you.

To have One who made me feel that way...His strength, His voice, His touch enveloping me. The very depth of Him piercing my soul.

Miss seeing you duckie, *hugs*

I have been missing you. -Russ

It seems to just scream out for two more words at the end:<br>

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<i>with pleasure</i><br>

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though it works so much better with them implied.

Happy to see you're writing (here) again, tiny dancer...your readers have missed you.

Simple so it doesn't overwhelm the reader, but effective and yes, either erotic or non. I like the sand/pebble/rocks images: they pull the piece together, give it cohesiveness. Nice to see a poem from you. :)

Mentioned on the new poems thread. :)