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by Du Lac

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sacksackalmost 19 years ago
a nice message...

simply and eloquently shared....thanks for writing this!

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
A thought provoking piece

Really well written

and gives out a positive

message, when i finished

reading it I wanted to read

it again and I did!

Nicely done,

Thanks.

~ Jenn

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
i believe the message.....

conveys this in a sense. each of us is a monument. we have the choice to build it the way we'd like it. this is written very well as there are many areas that speak to me.....but i'll leave this one:-----don

For time flies

and soon aged bones will no longer carry the burden

of a life lived in the dark.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
Inspirational

No body do it like the Du~

words of wisdom that even I can understand <grinin>

very nice write Du~

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
o)) du

u r over the top ..on this..just perfectly penned ..

"Do not lie down with dogs of a dredging world,

when on your knees let faith pull you up,

You are not alone!

For dogs too crave a peaceful soul."

reminds me of dido some how...that song white flag...

just incredible stuff du...lol/blue

quietpoetquietpoetalmost 19 years ago
perfect title

There, in your words, lies the key to all that is, and all that can possibly be... BALANCE! Thank you for sharing your lovely talent (person) with us (me...!)

John

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
youmust have

the most beautiful soul,

to write words such as

these that burn long

into hearts, that need

reminding..

we are only here once,

and may we leave behind,

a trail that others

may follow, in our path..

with the honor of all that

came before...

shine on sweet diamond !

-sGp-

TrollyTrollyover 18 years ago
From Under the Bridge

Mutual stroking continues. So sad.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Trolly made his choice

And I'll make mine:

'Faith..........

When we have this miracle

No longer do we care that we are outsiders'

ty,bd

lindianalindianaabout 18 years ago
Wonderful

You've taken the thoughts of many and expressed them.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The choices we make in a world in flux are important beyond our immediate realm.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The choices we make in a world in flux are important beyond our immediate realm.

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