All Comments on 'Citric Limerick'

I've never heard someone try to pull that off in a limerick, they kill the rhyme.

Yes, we all admit there are some finely worded limericks out there for consumption, but I do not think that yours are lesser, I just think they need a little bit of smoothing. They still made me giggle and I know that I would like them even more were I to be flying on a goodly bit of alcohol. *wink* I'm very glad you shared; they made me laugh, and I have mentioned them on the review thread in the Poetry Forum. So feel free to come by. Thank you for sharing!