by Birds__Eye
Yes, we all admit there are some finely worded limericks out there for consumption, but I do not think that yours are lesser, I just think they need a little bit of smoothing. They still made me giggle and I know that I would like them even more were I to be flying on a goodly bit of alcohol. *wink* I'm very glad you shared; they made me laugh, and I have mentioned them on the review thread in the Poetry Forum. So feel free to come by. Thank you for sharing!
I've never heard someone try to pull that off in a limerick, they kill the rhyme.