All Comments on 'Cliffside'

... I'm ready to JUMP. ~Imp

This flows well. I like the way you have put her out

there for us to read with everyday words. Just remember dude, it ain't the fall that kills you.

I like it too. I like the way it opens and the twist it takes. Sensuous and erotic undertones. A five.

I really like how this describes the dangers of temptation.

sentiments here!

How can I maintain

my tenuous grip

on this gentle sanity

with the promise of you pulling me

towards the edge of the extreme?

Loved this bit!

Syn

are incredibly sexy!!

~Honey

I liked this alot, wonderful imagery, Gripping! ~ J

this line especially: The fall into you more perilous/than threat of life or limb.

Very nice, Belegon

Flyguy

Playing with abandon at the precipice sounds less dangerous than giving in to her allure.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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