- Erotic Poetry
- Cloudy
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Click hereEach time she was taken,
lifted,
set free in the clouds,
she heard the soft voice whispering in her ear,
settling on her soul....
sawu (once)....
ta (twice)....
tsoi aleyesu (three times).
After the third,
when she no longer thought of anything
except the feel of the clouds all around her,
she heard a brief question....
siwu (more)?
to which her only reply was an ecstatic smile........
and the counting continued.....
nvgi aleyesu(four times)....
- COMMENTS
Crapolaover 19 years agoWhat a load of crap! I mean, excrement. Um, doo doo?
No -- I mean, it's absolutely lovely.
Anonymousover 19 years agoI love this poem because it is so gentle. The use of language, the imagery it creates... just marvelous! And-- just because I'm curious I have to ask-- is that Cherokee?
doormouseover 19 years agoTruly shows her essence, and I love how special and personal you made this for her.
I'm sure she loves it. ;-)
damppantiesalmost 20 years agoBeautiful words. Conjured up such a delightfully different atmosphere... I think I like that world. :)
lucky-E-levenalmost 20 years agoWonderful poem. All of your poetry is so inventive and heartfelt. And it is so nice to be able to comment here and let you know it. Please continue with your elegant words. I will, no doubt, make it a point to enjoy each and every one.
~lucky
cheerful_deviantalmost 20 years agoWell done matri. Beautiful poem by a beautiful woman about a beautiful woman.
