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twelveoonealmost 20 years agoGetting better
This is a twist with interest, could be developed a little more
"For I once I was a spirit
Who is now a ghost"
WickedEvealmost 20 years agoI like this:
On a constant float
And you get cold chills
Keep writing and sharing. :)
LeBrozover 17 years ago~~
Nice twist with words here but could use some tweaking, as in a final edit to check the spelling {hear instead of here} and some word placement. Very promising.
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