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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Nice subdued D/s piece, collar of lace rather than leather. You might try some trimming, as an example:<P>

<Br>I feel your touch, and my soul is set afire,<P>

comes across as more vibrant if written as:<P>

<Br>I feel your touch, my soul's set afire,

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