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by f-cynyr

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
how sad ....

you capture the demise of a once beautiful love so clearly ...

Selkie1Selkie1over 18 years ago
loved this but it's very sad ....

excellent depiction of the demise of a relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
so sad

its so sad, i have been ther, and it ended very messy.

awena-bawena-bover 18 years ago
tragic

you captured that tragic, sorriful, state that some unions ,come to, and yet are unable to correct or end.

dearg-cdearg-cover 18 years ago
you brought

me to tears with this. Its such a familiar state.

RantGirlRantGirlover 18 years ago
it's the last stanza that got me....

you've managed to capture the desperation.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

No amount of lust can close the gulf that blossoms here.

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i have slowed my postings here at lite, for a number of reasons, but i still post regularly on my poetry blog. if you wish to read more of my poetry, please go to http://f-cynyr.blogspot.com/ and https://boundtome.blogspot.com/ thank you.