All Comments on 'Communion'

A beautiful poem. I completely relate to the sentiment. Love it!

A very well written

piece of erotica.

This was wonderful

loved it!

Thanks,

~ Jenn

Yes! I know the feeling. Nicely expressed. ~Imp

Damn! I think I'm going to pass out. Aside from being very hot, this has a great structure and flow. The best I've read in a while. -T.

Truly a masterful piece of poetery.

Well done logo!

Truly a masterful piece of poetery.

Well done logo!

As usual, I am privileged to read your superb writing! Thanks!

Well done, logo...in a few simple lines, you've captured the essence of love and lust and sex and eroticism and the deep feelings that accompany all that...and it took less words to do that, than for me to write about it! You rock, girl!

A little too many hackneyed phrases and a little too many porn-like images to be truly erotic but quite hot inspite of that. Nice write.

That is a Communion that I would gladly get down on my knees for.

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