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by seannelson

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WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
this is a really interesting poem

And this has me giggling:

From my Grandpa, I learned that the Jeopardy contestant who writes his name the largest usually wins.

BooMerengueBooMerengueover 19 years ago
From Seannelson...

I learned that every teacher he had is important except the Bible? Or is that a(Freudian)typo? lol

Good job, Sean- Thanks.

Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
hmmmm

A thinkers poem, how many times do we really make the effort to do what this poem suggests.. what have we learned? Who from? why and how much time do we have left to change all of it?

hmmmm

Good work!

Du~

foehnfoehnover 19 years ago
I like a poem like this:

which doesn't end with the last line, but keeps on going. A little on the "prosaic" side, but I can't think how else the effect could have been achieved. I'll be looking at others....

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Some fun bits, some thoughtful bits; a process of discovery...

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Some fun bits, some thoughtful bits; a process of discovery...

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