All Comments on 'Consummation'

by matriarch

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slavegurlslavegurlalmost 20 years ago
hot

that was hot.. i loved the phrasing and the spacing.. i raced along with the arousal to the orgasmic conclusion.

damppantiesdamppantiesalmost 20 years ago
Smiling

Loved your words, Mat.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Ambrosia

for the eyes. lovely flow and i can see the love so clearly.thank you for sharing that poem, Mat... more please!

EmeraldKittenEmeraldKittenalmost 20 years ago
Yummy

Mmmmmmm.... Love it, just like everything else ya write. ;)

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
Oh wow!!

That was great!!

Very vivid images!! ;-)

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