All Comments on 'consumption'

is a tremendous sense of power in these words.

I don't get one image or feeling...but like a slide show there are sudden bursts of sharp well defined pictures that form a very interesting chain.

great language.

that was me

: D

you have such a talent for taking language and making it play your tune. approximating rhyme with a tease, you dare us to pause.

I loved this:

"the cleanest sheets

with claystains

where the potato diggin toes at least still have a dirty wiggle."

...that I love this. Just sayin'.

Oh - and I voted.

no thermometer, now, ever.

Wonderful show of cascading imagery.