All Comments on 'Convicted'

by OhMissScarlett

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BelegonBelegonover 18 years ago
Lots of juxtaposition...

and some interesting pairings and images. I would have found it hard to imagine an erotic poem that used both "yuppies" and "underground railroad" before this...nice piece OMS.

lil_elvislil_elvisover 18 years ago
Strange, Heady Brew

So much to contemplate here. Past vs. present, kink vs. propriety. The complexity, so simply stated, is gonna leave me contemplating this one for a long time.

AppleBiterAppleBiterover 18 years ago
I echo

the statements about complexity. Hmm. This poem really causes a person to pause and think -- that is a sign of excellence. ;) Well done, as usual, Scarlett. :)

Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
Wow

Nicely done, gorgeous!

~Honey

sophia janesophia janeover 18 years ago
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Loved it, Scarlett.

impressiveimpressiveover 18 years ago
Oh, I don't know ...

... a breathalizer test might've kept this gem from ever being posted! It's succint & gritty. ;) Well done, OMS. Kisses, Imp

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Cuff me, beat me this is good!

You beautiful bizarre thing, love this. Fabulous voice and mood.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
*Gulp*

A lil outta my league, but I LIKE IT !!!!

Love the imagery ... boy

the visuals this brings to mind.

Naughty... but a Naughty Nice ~

Grrr ~

More Please Gurl ~!!!!

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