All Comments on 'Convicted'

A lil outta my league, but I LIKE IT !!!!

Love the imagery ... boy

the visuals this brings to mind.

Naughty... but a Naughty Nice ~

Grrr ~

More Please Gurl ~!!!!

You beautiful bizarre thing, love this. Fabulous voice and mood.

... a breathalizer test might've kept this gem from ever being posted! It's succint & gritty. ;) Well done, OMS. Kisses, Imp

Loved it, Scarlett.

Nicely done, gorgeous!

~Honey

the statements about complexity. Hmm. This poem really causes a person to pause and think -- that is a sign of excellence. ;) Well done, as usual, Scarlett. :)

So much to contemplate here. Past vs. present, kink vs. propriety. The complexity, so simply stated, is gonna leave me contemplating this one for a long time.

and some interesting pairings and images. I would have found it hard to imagine an erotic poem that used both "yuppies" and "underground railroad" before this...nice piece OMS.