All Comments on 'coyote call'

Concur with earlier comments. To fix, move the apostrophe from it's to lovers and that only significant issue is resolved. Very nice character piece.

I agree about changing it's to his.

I agree with the other comments. You might consider changing "it's luster" to "his luster". You avoid the apostrophe problem that way, and I think humanize the coyote some more.

I've heard that ritual many times. "Sendera" - path, trail. Good, unforced rhymes, although the last stanza with all the "ng" endings jangled a bit. (I wondered if you could have found words ending in vowel sounds, like "o" or "u"...)

I think "lovers" should have been "lover's" and "it's" should have been "its." But you've written us a very good poem!

Good imagery, you didn't seem to be "fishing" for the rhymes which often detracts from a poem of this nature. Be careful of it's/its....otherwise effective!

wow very good, loved the way it flowed

perhaps one more verse, seem to leave me hanging

but a very very good peice, bro!

those senderas (grin)

excellent poem~