All Comments on 'craving'

Oh wow. You have captured such a depth of submission! Very good job! Bravo!

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and it builds into an inferno..well done.

Excellent ~ you kept most of the poem lean and taut, conveying so well the world of Dom and sub, then with such a severe buildup, that final stanza conveyed a strong sense of release.

i loved the fire/flame imagery. how the heat of the craving burns Him into her. only a true slave could feel the depth of these words.