All Comments on 'Cusp'

Nicely worded. Well thought out thsnx

The affirmation of love and life, the joy of the present, the anticipation of the future. Very touching.

for voluptuous, sensuous, moving language, and this has them all. It gathered me, drew me in, and made me feel everything you feel. Incredible piece of writing.

I loved this.. walks the reader from the innocent love to the depths of all that we dream and hope for to be real...loved that last stanza thank you for writing this!

flowed like a soothing water fall trickling from wisdom pool to tranquil wisdom pool to tiny rippled pool...grin

great poem!

Are my glasses steamed over, or is there some smoldering eroticism here?

Very nice, imp!

Your poem is mentioned on the new poems review thread on the poetry board.

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Touching, Imp.

and each piece a building block on the previous stanza. Wonderful word choices , and sentiment I can share. You got me.

and now I have a huge lump in my throat. Bravo!!

What a lovley poem.

I was taken away, swept, carried, submerged into another world. Just loved the your wording. The imagery was silky smooth. More Please~~

gorgeous imp. ethereal...left me smiling.

more, imp...please

*hugs*

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