All Comments on 'Cycle of Stolen Love'

at first I was not crazy about the abrupt endings of each line, until I realized it was the ticking of the clock, the turning of the cycle. nicely done. as

Loved how this worked

I could almost hear

a clock ticking when

i read it.

Thanks,

~ J

so did this inescapabe meter set to a clock's ticking time away. I especially enjoyed the "countdown" feel bringing the piece - and a love lost awareness - to a close. Great work, minx!

Vixxx

the steady pace that indicates time's passing.

A great thought provoking expression.

I like this part

Time falls to pieces

Moments are stolen

Unfortunatley in the end your a felon with a mess and a broken clock;)

Keep this kind of writting going and your going to be big some day....I enjoyed this so much I made a copy of it and showed it to 4 of my friends...very impressed...I could relate

Tick of the clock

Tied to the

Beat of the words

Nicely done.

and meaningful..very well done.