All Comments on 'Cycle of Stolen Love'

and meaningful..very well done.

Tick of the clock

Tied to the

Beat of the words

Nicely done.

Keep this kind of writting going and your going to be big some day....I enjoyed this so much I made a copy of it and showed it to 4 of my friends...very impressed...I could relate

A great thought provoking expression.

I like this part

Time falls to pieces

Moments are stolen

Unfortunatley in the end your a felon with a mess and a broken clock;)

the steady pace that indicates time's passing.

so did this inescapabe meter set to a clock's ticking time away. I especially enjoyed the "countdown" feel bringing the piece - and a love lost awareness - to a close. Great work, minx!

Vixxx

Loved how this worked

I could almost hear

a clock ticking when

i read it.

Thanks,

~ J

at first I was not crazy about the abrupt endings of each line, until I realized it was the ticking of the clock, the turning of the cycle. nicely done. as