All Comments on 'Cynicism Conceived'

Like this.

the bland soup line was great.

as was the little girl and misguided teenager..

I can feel this woman...

beautiful piece

thank you

Not a work of greatness,

but full of thoughts worth reading.

This is an unpoloshed gem. So much beauty waiting to be buffed into a shine.

I was just wondering where you were.

This poem DOES have a lot of potential-- i cannot wait to read your middle age poetry- you are so good already. It is better in some ways. I dont know, wait, am I middle aged yet? lol

Thanks so much Anna, I know I have a bit of growing to do that will only come from age and possibly from studying the 'masters' LOL. Thanks all so much for these awesome comments. Tho I do have to say.. YYD.. You confuse me.