by ramonathompson
Kinda made me made. That's how you know you did your job.
And a good one at that. *Dammit*
this is a weak poem. Even as satire, it's uninteresting. It doesn't seem honest, it reads feeble minded...now taking into consideration the content--it seems you just lifted the story about that little girl that was killed by her mom that's so popular now on all the news shows. This is not an anonymous comment, I'd really like some insight into why you wrote and posted this.
I liked your entry, but I feel like your child is 1/2 of you, literally. Why would you cause emotional terror to yourself. I guarantee if you stop, a large weight will be lifted off your shoulders.